I have read my tutor's observations on chapter two and have now got to the point where I am scratching my head (Ti Tree oil is another). I have amended a few things, but now I have got to REALLY think what I want to say, because I don't feel inspired to write ANYTHING on the subject. I think I will have to scuttle off and do some research - that may help. That and dictaphone.
21:02
Funny how things are. I pondered for hours without writing a thing, even cleaned the board and stared at it for a while. Eventually, I had a 'penny drop' moment and I think I have reworked the plan to my advantage and it looks nothing like the original essay or it's plan, but I do believe that I am nearer to getting it sussed.
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Good luck with the paper. I feel a tiny fraction of your pain after spending time last night trying to find solid references so my daughter could propose an anthropology paper on show jumping.
This is the sort of thing my dear Editors at Brigits Flame used to do for me. I'd go over and over something, then post it off and they'd come back with gurt paragraphs of ... 'It would be better if you changed that round a bit... to that...' or 'take out all those commas'. 'finish the sentence... it is hanging!' simply cos you can't see the Forest for all the wood chippings around. So glad, and I'm sure its now puffick!!!
TOLD YOU... you'll easily get the 75% mark. HUGS and happies!!!!!!