I have read my tutor's observations on chapter two and have now got to the point where I am scratching my head (Ti Tree oil is another). I have amended a few things, but now I have got to REALLY think what I want to say, because I don't feel inspired to write ANYTHING on the subject. I think I will have to scuttle off and do some research - that may help. That and dictaphone.
Funny how things are. I pondered for hours without writing a thing, even cleaned the board and stared at it for a while. Eventually, I had a 'penny drop' moment and I think I have reworked the plan to my advantage and it looks nothing like the original essay or it's plan, but I do believe that I am nearer to getting it sussed.
Posted from changling67 at Dreamwidth