Mean As Custard (calico_pye) wrote,
Mean As Custard

Primo Levi - Draft 3

More of the same and I am in effective lockdown.  I have to shave off 1,000 words before adding sprinkles - I maybe gone for some time :-(

After lengthy rewriting and editing, I have brought the word count down from 3,375 to 3,296 - a whopping 79 words.  Coming away from the computer to have a late dinner :-/

TBH, I can't concentrate anymore.  Think I need to do a bit of reading and see if I can subtract some of the 'all-but-the-kitchen-sink' stuff that I deem to have in it.
Tags: ba english yr 3, grindstone files - year 3, if this is a man, primo levi, war writing since 1914

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